Reading Challenge Update: The March of Time

Here’s how my 2012 reading challenge is going plus reviews of March’s selections.

Standard disclosure: I bought the first two books reviewed here and borrowed the last two from my local library. Several are included in my Amazon Affiliate store. I receive a small percentage of each sale made through that widget. All opinions here are my own.

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REVIEWS

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A Visit from the Goon Squad by Jennifer Egan
Don’t be surprised if you start to hear the lyrics to the Steve Miller Band’s “Fly Like an Eagle” – Time keeps on slippin’, slippin’, slippin’/Into the future – while you read Jennifer Egan’s latest. The titular goon is the steady march of time and most of her characters feel fairly sober and maudlin about its passage.

Nothing unusual about that, but nothing new either. And it becomes a rather plodding outcome since the book is not a novel, but a series of chapters that amount to bare-bones profiles of a plethora of characters, tenuously linked through time. That this book wound up winning the Pulitzer Prize is the big surprise here.

Egan, who also wrote The Keep and Look at Me, is a writer of solid, plainspoken prose. Saying that seems like a diss when it isn’t. But the connections she’s trying to make among characters don’t hold a candle to the brilliant plotting of a Kate Atkinson or a David Mitchell. And her descriptions are just that: descriptions. They don’t carry the poetic or metaphoric weight that Alan Hollinghurst’s or Ali Smith’s do.

Novels comprised of linked stories about different characters need the distinct touch of a short-story expert who can unveil a plot arc and wholly develop characters in a limited amount of time. Egan cheats the linked-stories formula a bit by using indie-rock producer Bennie Salazar and his sticky-fingered assistant, Sasha, as framing devices. Every now and then a chapter returns to one of these two, but never moves their stories forward in any plausible or important way.

Fine examples of linked stories exist: check out instead David Mitchell’s Cloud Atlas or Ghostwritten or any of Kate Atkinson’s Jackson Brodie mysteries.

Where 3 Roads Meet by John Barth
This selection was gathering dust on my shelf, a long-ago gift from a fellow book-lover. Barth is a National Book Award-winner (for Chimera) and wears a jaunty beret in his author photo, which worried me. These days, I need to be in the frame of mind for tackling this level of artifice. The three novellas play with character, storytelling and plot as much as they do with language. It’s at times witty, but since clever wordplay takes up huge chunks of real estate at the beginning of each story, it’s a long while before you manage to meet the characters and grasp the narrative flow.

Here’s an example from the second story, “I’ve Been Told,” which, the book jacket says, “traces no less than the history of storytelling.” This is absolutely verbatim, even though it seems like words are missing/duplicated:

“But now – fasten seat belts, folks – suppose First-Person Narrator of story to be not only its principal character, but It: the Story itself, telling us itself itself! Who’s in the driver’s seat now, I ask you, leapfrogging space-breaks and barreling us westward lickety-split through a landscape thus far featureless perhaps for want of Narrator’s supplying us with its features? Moreover, since Setting is an ingredient of Story, as are accessory characters like Yours-Truly-as-Sidekick and Dramatic Vehicles like three-wheel Lizzie, how can ‘I’-the-Narrator of ‘Me’-the-Story differentiate himself from them/us in order to tell you us (except, I suppose, as ‘I’ might tell of ‘my’ toes and fingers, ‘my’ hopes and fears, ‘my’ self…)? Well: ‘I’ for one, get dizzy just thinking about such things…”

Me, too.

There’s nothing inherently wrong (or unenjoyable for the reader) in using the structure of storytelling to tell a story, but, as with any story, we need to feel engaged with the characters and plot and what’s happening here is that the highly stylized writing serves as a barricade rather than a window. You never feel close to these characters and too easily the Dramatic Vehicle steers off-course, so you never become involved in the story either.

It’s pretty easy to find Barth on Wikipedia, but here’s an interesting PBS interview where he discusses his writing.

Explore the Gone-Away World with this interactive website for Harkaway’s novel.

The Gone-Away World by Nick Harkaway
The problems evident in the Barth book don’t trouble Harkaway’s, which blends the macho-bravura style of Chuck Palahniuk’s and Jonathan Franzen’s fiction. I think Harkaway’s writing escapes the excesses of both of these writers and creates a darn fine post-apocalyptic world to boot.

I have a fondness for dystopian literature, so I was, perhaps, more willing than you might be to wade through 498 pages to find out where Harkaway was taking these characters, a rogue clean-up crew, capable of tackling the monsters summoned after a new and untried weapon is set off during an Iraqi Freedom-type military exercise:

“Professor Derek and his team, by dint of his enormous intellect and considerable innovative powers and their collective technological know-how, have created a sort of Holy Grail of bombs. Or, at least, they have created the science necessary to create the bomb. The engineering, as ever, is playing catch-up…But any time soon they will be able to produce a controlled editing of the world within a discrete area, stripping out the information and leaving nothing behind – not even regret. They will have made the perfect weapon. They will be able to make the enemy Go Away.”

We learn about the Go Away bomb on page 138 – having left the current-day events of Chapter One for a seven-chapter digression that allows the main characters to meet in a sandbox as toddlers, go to school and join the military. It takes till page 303 and Chapter 9 to get back to where we started.

This seemed a bit long until the reader encounters a late-in-the-story twist of Palahniukian proportions and then the character history becomes so entwined in the shock of the twist that it seems mandatory. (Still, it could have been shorter, but the writing of all the nuances of this brave new world and its many inhabitants is so fine, and you’re pulled in so close to these characters, that the journey is worth it.)

One could quibble, as one does with Palahniuk or the movies of M. Night Shyamalan, that certain events don’t make sense in retrospect, but there are also lovely and well-established characters woven in and out of the tale to create a perfect pattern. Harkaway never diverts from the main story just to show off; everything serves the plot. Even minor characters, like a bespoke tailor, are lovingly lingered over: “He is not so much unctuous as balsamic.”

And, in a world where so much of the past is gone away, there is still the humanity of people dedicated to remembering and tending their loyalty to the good people of their past: “He was never going to let those people fade. He wanted to know all about the places that weren’t there any more.”

There are surprises on top of the major twist akin to the wonderful moment at the end of “Star Wars,” when you’re so enthralled by the dogfight between Darth and Luke that you’ve forgotten all about that scoundrel Han Solo and thus his return to save the day – and Skywalker’s tail – is all the more exciting for its unexpectedness.

Harkaway’s just-released second novel is Angelmaker. This is a writer with vast imagination – a creator of worlds and intriguing characters and striving to understand it all. It will be fascinating to see where he ventures.

Facebook for Dummies, Third Edition by Carolyn Abram and Leah Pearlman
I’d been wary about signing up for Facebook, mainly because of the company’s flip practice of changing privacy settings without user notification. But, I finally gave in and launched a page for the blog and a personal page. A confirmed Twitter-lover, I don’t quite fathom Facebook, which doesn’t have the immediacy and, for me, the editorial sensibility of being connected to news-producers and -curators.

For a while there, I felt I was having my own personal internal debate about Facebook in the way that Jerry and George argued about Newman on “Seinfeld”:

George: Maybe there’s more to Newman than we think.
Jerry: No, there’s less.
George: He is merry.
Jerry: I’ll give him that. He’s merry.

That pretty much sums up the way I feel about Facebook. Hence this guide – perhaps there was more to the social platform than I was initially picking up on.

This is the second Dummies book I’ve read, and I found it packed with tips, warnings, Q&A, and helpful screen shots. Authors Abram and Pearlman did a great job explaining philosophies and approaches to Facebook usage here. The writing was breezy and engaging and, presumably, knowledgeable. I say “presumably” and indicate the edition above because platforms like Facebook change so frequently (the Timeline feature happened to launch during the time I was reading this) that the version I read was utterly out of date. There was almost nothing (from menus to functionality and concepts) that worked in the same way as described in this particular volume, which isn’t so much the fault of the authors as perhaps a rationale for making Dummies books that relate to fast-changing technology exclusively available online. I recently purchased The Complete Idiot’s Guide to WordPress, and I’m thinking I’d better start reading it sooner rather than later.

What did you read this month? What do you recommend I include in my reading challenge this year?

Literary News from the Middle East and Asia

A late-season bout of flu has made me remiss in following up on the results of two distinguished literary awards, the International Prize for Arabic Fiction and the Man Asian.

Two days ago in Abu Dhabi, Lebanese writer Rabee Jaber was honored with the 2012 Arabic Fiction Prize for The Druze of Belgrade, a novel of exile following the civil war in Lebanon in the 1860s.

The press release announcing the award notes that the judges “praised the novel for its powerful portrayal of the fragility of the human condition through the evocation of a past historical period in highly sensitive prose.”

Ever since blogging about this literary prize, I’ve been trying to add several of the short-listed books to my reading list, and Jaber’s is one of them. However, I’ve had a tough time trying to find the book, which isn’t available through the public library system, on Amazon.com or on Amazon’s U.K. site, where I often go in search of hard-to-find books. I hope this distinction will give a higher profile to The Druze of Belgrade and make it more easily available. If you’re able to find it, I and other readers would be grateful if you’d share the source in the Comments.

For more information about Jaber and his latest novel and the other short-listed authors, visit the International Prize for Arabic Fiction website.

The Man Asian Literary Prize was awarded on March 15 to Kyung-sook Shin for her wonderful Please Look After Mom. This book is available at public libraries and at booksellers, and I highly recommend it (here’s my review of this and other books from the Man Asian short list).

To link to a BBC World Service interview with Kyung-sook Shin, visit the Man Asian Literary Prize website.

Why I Was Afraid to Blog

Guess what? We’ve arrived at the first anniversary of this blog.

That’s a statement I never expected to write for any number of reasons. There’s the 15 students who signed up along with me for a spring 2011 blogging class in hopes of launching a blog, sharing thoughts, advice, creative endeavors, and, in some cases, products, and maybe, just maybe, making some money or getting a job or book contract the way Julie Powell did with the Julie & Julia Project. Only six of us actually “attended” the online class and created blogs. At last view, only two of us are still at it.

There may be more than 150 millions blogs – running the gamut from corporate to very personal – but, pro and amateur alike, many fall by the wayside after a season or two. They succumb to a dearth of content, time, resources, reader interest, or due to technical and legal snafus.

Strangely – and even though I’ve watched the blogs of companies and friends collapse for one or more of the above reasons – they weren’t why I didn’t expect to be celebrating a year of blogging.

A Painful Secret

I’ll tell you a secret I rarely share: I was afraid to launch a blog because I live in chronic pain. It’s taken me a year to feel comfortable enough in the blogosphere to let you in on this secret. One reason is that when I use the words “chronic pain,” I’m not referring to something that takes up a portion of my day; I don’t start out fine and then feel aches in the evening after I’ve spent hours at the keyboard; it isn’t about a stiff neck or a sore shoulder. What I mean by “chronic pain” is that I am in excruciating pain on the right side of my body, from the top of my head to the tips of my toes, and have been every second of every minute of every day for the past 12 years.

What began with a mountain-biking accident in Costa Rica, when I hit my head, neck and lower back on a boulder and suffered a mild concussion and multicolored bruising, morphed into an all-encompassing condition that frequently reaches over to the left side of my body, as well.

There’s no specific diagnosis for what happened during and after the accident and no effective treatment. The first (and often only) thing most doctors offer is painkillers, which I reject out of hand since they aren’t a cure. Plus, I can’t imagine trying to think, much less write, through a fog of barbiturates.

Blogging done right requires stamina. It’s not just the writing – there’s editorial planning, research, fact-checking, editing, and, most important, engaging with readers. I expend much of my energy every day dealing with pain that is inescapable, that can’t be isolated because of its enveloping nature. There is no time off and there are many days when pain feels like it’s made a coffin of my body.

I do as much as I can to contain this and keep it from the people around me, but in the often cruel irony of affliction, pain can affect the way I communicate. It’s a bit like that episode of “Buffy the Vampire Slayer,” the one where she tries to save people by slaying a monster and winds up with an aspect of the demon instead. In my case, the pain builds up so acutely in my neck and jaw that it comes out of my mouth, impatient and snarky. That is something I adamantly never want to happen when I blog or interact with the people who read my blog. And it’s a pledge I intend to observe with you, my readers, who’ve taken this journey with me for the past year in this blog.

My Shiny New Monster Part

These last dozen years have made me acutely aware – especially at the office, in high-stress situations – that everyone has their own personal demons and aches and pains. And, like Buffy’s aspect of the demon, which arrived in the form of mind-reading, not every problem is visible or obvious. Living with chronic pain has helped me to give people a break because you never know what others might be dealing or struggling with on a particular day, and it would be terrible to write off someone who may very well be in the same boat as I am and not be able to help themselves.

I’ve lost enough of my life to chronic pain that I don’t want to lose out on the wonderful things that other people have to share. What’s that line of Katharine Hepburn’s at the end of “The Philadelphia Story”? “The time to make up your mind about people is never.” That’s been a valuable lesson of the past 12 years, living with this secret, and one I wouldn’t have wanted to miss.

Travel writing and photography that inspires me each and every week:

Rita Wechter’s “One Day in America” blog

Madonna on Twitter: 24 Hours to Express Yourself

In a move that seems more like a misstep, Madonna’s promotion for her new album, “MDNA,” includes a brief encounter with fans on a one-day-only Twitter account, @MadonnaMDNAday, starting tonight at 10 p.m. (EST).

For many years, since she first appeared on the scene in the ‘80s, Madonna seemed especially connected to her fans through new mediums, like music videos. Madonna’s music transcended her talent and engaged fans in powerful and empowering ways. Which is why I’m surprised to find the singer making such a token effort at outreach in this era of proven social media campaigns, whether they be for Lady Gaga or for films like “Hunger Games,” which rallied fan support on social media channels for a full year before its successful opening weekend and wound up spending a fractional amount of the millions doled out to push Disney’s bomb “John Carter.”

Queen for a Day

What Madonna’s doing feels more like descending from the throne for a day to mingle – at keyboard’s length – with the little people. It might be the kind of thing a real queen could get away with, but not an over-50 pop star whose records need to reach the lucrative teen and tween audiences.

I was going to suggest perhaps true Hollywood royalty could be forgiven this type of obvious promotional approach – someone, say, like Elizabeth Taylor – but Dame Elizabeth had a Twitter account and did engage her fans on a regular basis for several years before she died.

Yoko Ono – artist, musician, mom, peace activist, and keeper of the Lennon legacy – is another public figure who, by all lights, probably doesn’t need to involve herself with Twitter. Yet she’s an active tweeter, keeping fans up-to-date on her latest exhibitions, music remixes, philanthropic efforts, and news related to John Lennon’s vast musical oeuvre. She also uses social media to gather and answer fan questions about any subject under the sun every single week, not once every few years when a new album drops.

Lady Gaga engages her Little Monsters in much the same way on Twitter. These are great examples of utilizing social media rather than cynically using it.

I thought we’d reached the point where it’s understood that social media can’t be an afterthought or glued onto the back end of traditional marketing efforts. One-time social media outreach isn’t community-building. While existing fans may take advantage of such singular offers to see if, in her meager time online, Madonna will deign to answer their questions, a short Twitter Q&A isn’t the way to draw new fans and build a committed community. That takes time and transparency and, frankly, responsibility, because once you’ve grown a community, you are to an extent responsible for it and accountable to it.

If you’re in it for the long haul, you’re going to behave in a way that isn’t just about self-promotion and personal benefit, you’ll want to be friends and an advocate and a news source, and be receptive to all the same kinds of input from your followers. And isn’t that what makes these communities so much more rewarding (and not just in the monetary sense) and meaningful over the long run?

What do you think? Is this a brilliant marketing move that makes fans crave more or a social media misstep? Share your thoughts in the comments.

Writing that inspired me this week:

“Everybody’s talking and no one says a word.”
~ John Lennon, “Nobody Told Me”

What to Expect When You’re Entering (Award Programs, That Is)

I’ve focused previous posts about awards on how you, the applicant, can frame your submission to meet the expectations of the judges.

Today, in light of my most recent experience as a 2012 judge, I thought I’d pass along some thoughts about what applicants have a right to expect from award programs. After all, they wouldn’t exist without you and your work.

Prompt responses to your questions – None of the major PR, marketing, communications, and advertising award programs are free; some cost upwards of $300 per entry. I’ve never experienced a situation where a representative didn’t email me back within one business day, but if you’ve paid your entry fee and don’t get a response, get in touch with the sponsoring organization immediately and let them know. There may be a simple explanation (such as the person responsible for answering is out sick and no one else has the password to his email), but professional organizations don’t want you to experience this kind of customer service any more than you do.

Clear answers about judging categories – While we’re on the subject of answers, it’s time to do away with the stipulation that the applicant is responsible for figuring out the correct category for his or her submission and bears the risk of entry disqualification for making the wrong choice. That’s too much money to waste, especially when some category descriptions barely extend past a single sentence. Organizations know what these categories mean when they offer them, otherwise they wouldn’t be able to disqualify entrants for being in the wrong category. Applicants can and should weigh in on rules like these and ask for change when they seem unduly unfair.

Fully functional online submissions and tracking – We’re a dozen years into the new millennium and well past the days of browser and file incompatibility and upload-bandwidth limitations. Yet some heavy-hitter award programs still don’t offer online submissions or their entry systems freak out when they discover you’re using Safari. You should not have to pay additional funds to overnight or second-day-air a bulging notebook to program headquarters. Entry fees for award programs add a comfy windfall to the annual budgets of these organizations; applicants have the right to insist that some of their monies be reinvested in effective online tools to support their entries.

Consistent advance preparation for judges – Judging is typically administered by volunteers. Many, like me, have been serving for years. Generally, though, there’s a mix of old and new. Seasoned isn’t necessarily better than new, but it may be time – given how much money goes into these programs – to establish some ground rules for judges. A mandatory workshop, for example, to go over what’s expected and get some hands-on experience with practice entries in multiple categories. I’m loathe to suggest that judges be accredited, but that’s mainly because accreditation isn’t standardized in the PR/marketing/communications professions. The organizations that offer accreditation each have their own process and their own certification (that’s why there are ABCs and APRs). Until there’s industry-wide standardization, certifications like these don’t carry the weight they could – and that’s as true for serving on award programs as it is in carrying out professional duties within an organization.

FeedbackFeedback – Realistically, you enter award programs in hopes of a win, place or show. But, programs can be a tremendous source of objective, third-party feedback on your campaigns and creative work. It may take all of the following year to put that feedback into action on the next program you tackle, but the reward may be a stronger campaign for your client and an award for truly great work. Feedback may also serve to help you validate certain aspects of your program or your creative with clients and senior leaders. When judges aren’t prepped to understand that helpful, constructive feedback is expected of them, they often don’t provide it or write a few, general comments that aren’t very meaningful for the applicant. If you’ve been on the receiving end of vague feedback, you have every right to ask for more specific feedback on your entry this year and to encourage the organization to set standards around feedback: tone, length, constructiveness, focus on both concept (or strategy) as well as execution, with specific details about what works and what could be stronger.

Promotion – At the very least, winners should be announced on the organization’s website and in its main print publication and promoted to industry trade magazines in a press release. A number of organizations offer galas or award celebrations and showcase winning entries. Be wary of any award program that merely sends you notification that you’ve won and doesn’t invest the time in promoting its honorees.

Relevant/updated award categories – We’re a half-decade (or more) into the use of social media in PR, marketing, advertising, and communications campaigns. There are social platforms for mass audiences and different ones for internal or employee audiences. Encourage the addition or updating of award categories to reflect the ever-changing nature of the work we do.

While it may carry a bit more weight to be a member of the sponsoring organization, award programs exist because of your participation and that can and should include providing feedback on your experience as an entrant. Be constructive in the same manner you’d like your own work reviewed, but don’t hesitate to share your thoughts. You’ll contribute to making these programs even better and more relevant and informative for everyone.

Related articles:

Crafting a Strong Award Program Entry for Your Work
Writing Your Entry: How to Make Your Work Competitive this Awards Season
Writing Your Writing-Award Entry

Let the Sun Shine In

Sunshine Week logo

National Sunshine Week, March 11 - 17, 2012.

This is Sunshine Week, March 11 – 17, celebrating the public’s right to know, a concept which these days goes by the less clarifying expression “transparency.” The culminating event of the week is Freedom of Information Day on March 16, the birthday of James Madison, the fourth U.S. president, who is considered the “Father of the Constitution” and champion of the Bill of Rights.

Sunshine Week is a nonpartisan event supported by politicians and public officials, journalists, libraries, schools, historians, museums, archives, and anyone who values open government.

You can find out more about activities in your community on the Sunshine Week website, which notes that events have been organized across the country to “enlighten and empower people to play an active role in their government at all levels, and to give them access to information that makes their lives better and their communities stronger.”

If you can’t get to one of the celebrations in your community, celebrate by viewing and re-reading the U.S. Constitution and learn more about Madison’s long road to ensuring its ratification on the National Archives website.

Cartoon contributed by Steve Greenberg, Los Angeles.

Writing that inspired me this week:

“Congress shall make no law respecting an establishment of religion, or prohibiting the free exercise thereof; or abridging the freedom of speech, or of the press; or the right of the people peaceably to assemble, and to petition the Government for a redress of grievances.”
~ First Amendment, U.S. Constitution

Writing: Crossing the Finish Line

Writer's blockSo far, I’ve attempted to debunk the concept of writer’s block to help you get started and examined what happens when you get stuck in the middle of a piece. In part 3, let’s wrap it up, so you have in your hands a writing project that you’re happy about sharing with the world.

If you’re content writing stories, essays, poems, or in a journal and plan never to show your creative efforts to anyone, then it really doesn’t matter whether you finish or not. But, if you’re already a working writer – or want a long career as a writer – then finishing is what makes you a Writer (as in formal title and job description) or Author (with published works to your name).

So, let’s address some of the reasons why writers struggle to finish and get you on with your work:

You can’t think how the piece should end – This sounds like a bigger problem than it is. Before you think I’m being flippant, I’ll go on record and admit that while I don’t suffer from this in my professional writing life, I struggle immensely with endings in my creative writing. So, what’s the answer? In many ways, it’s the same for both kinds of writing: Learn from the masters.

In corporate communications, PR, marketing, advertising, and journalism, there are tons of examples of completed pieces that went before yours. Whether you’re writing a press release, website content or an ad campaign, go back and look at: 1) great examples that cover a subject similar to yours, and 2) the work that inspires you and exemplifies best-in-the-practice. Before you get too absorbed in all that admiring, jump to the ending. How did these previous pros close the deal? Did they reiterate overall goals or messages? Let a distinguished figure do the talking with a closing quote? Tug on your heartstrings? Make you laugh? Or did they focus on something meaningful to the intended audience? Figure out why that particular ending worked for that piece of writing for that audience, and you’ll be halfway home; now, look at your own goals, messages and audience, and choose the approach that’s most meaningful for your readers.

If you’re writing PR or journalism, reading coverage of topics similar to yours is invaluable. For PR people, you’ll learn what angles work in a pitch – or are perhaps already overused. Similarly, journalists can see how the story was covered previously and decide whether they want to utilize an effective format or try a new direction or style.

This process of analyzing stories similar to your own is just as helpful for creative writers. So, you’ve got a story with characters, plot, themes. Examine the works of other writers and how they got to a conclusion. Does each character in your story have a complete arc or did you leave the heroine’s old boyfriend in Idaho somewhere, putting on his shoes one morning? Is there a gaping donut hole in your plot? Are all the strings of your themes playing together in harmony by the time you reach The End?

writer's blockBe wary, as I mentioned in Part 1, of setting aside your work while waiting for inspiration to strike. In a way, writing is not all that different from sport – you’re just exercising a different set of muscles. No good comes from letting your brain go slack. Be disciplined about regular practice: this is where skills are built.

If analyzing other works doesn’t inspire your own imaginative ending, then try brain puzzles. This is apparently what Joel and Ethan Coen did when writing their first film, “Blood Simple.” The Coen brothers deliberately wrote themselves into corners, where characters were seemingly trapped – frequently at gunpoint. They didn’t let themselves or their characters off the hook; they created the challenge of writing believable sequences that took characters and plot to the next inescapable corner. And the next. And the one after that.

Here’s what critic Roger Ebert said about the writing of this plot:

“The genius of ‘Blood Simple’ is that everything that happens seems necessary. The movie’s a blood-soaked nightmare in which greed and lust trap the characters in escalating horror. The plot twists in upon itself. Characters are found in situations of diabolical complexity. And yet it doesn’t feel like the film is just piling it on. Step by inexorable step, logically, one damned thing leads to another.”

The successful writers I’ve met in Hollywood have one common trait: They set challenges for themselves – whether around characters or plots – and they write themselves out of them. And they work at these challenges every day, whether at their computers or while waiting in line at the Coffee Bean & Tea Leaf.

You’re not willing to put in the time – Some of the advice I’ve offered in this three-part series involves extracurricular activities, whether mapping out a writing schedule or doing certain exercises. Like writing, it’s the doing that gets you to the end result. For example, in Part 1, I suggested an exercise that involved rating your expectations of writing assignments from 1 (“could’ve done it in my sleep”) to 10 (“unbearably awful”) and then rating the assignment again, after it was done. You can dismiss the suggestion out of hand or assume it won’t work for you or even figure you “get it,” so you don’t need to actually try it. But, in this particular case, as with suggestions that involve practice writing, it’s your own accumulated experience that creates in you a solid foundation of confidence and skill, and that’s what will enable you to ward off this thing that’s keeping your hand from the keyboard or pen – call it writer’s block, ennui, depression, procrastination, stress, obligations, discouragement, lack of faith, whatever, but when you’re haunted by these specters, trust me, you’ll want some inner ghostbusters you can call upon to make them go away, so you can get back to your real work.

You’re having issues at work/home and failing to complete writing assignments – When you’re having problems, they can interfere with meeting writing deadlines. Ultimately, though, failing to meet deadlines will compound your problems. Whatever’s going on at work, you need to formulate a way to address it and even proactively discuss your plan of attack with your boss. It’s likely your manager is already concerned about missed deadlines. Demonstrating an awareness of the situation, concern for meeting goals, willingness to redress the problem and seek advice will give you some traction, as long as you follow through. Likewise, once the air is cleared, stay late if you need to, but finish those writing assignments and turn them in. (If your home life is bleeding into your work life, this will become a much bigger problem a lot faster than you ever imagine. Get the two separated immediately and start practicing compartmentalization. Leave the emotional issues of home at home and don’t give yourself time to think about them once you cross the threshold of your office.)

Finding time to writeIf the problem at work or home is that you don’t have enough time to write, then you’ll need to print out your weekly schedule and share it with your manager, spouse, roommates – whoever’s impeding your ability to get your writing done. Whether you need to assure your roommates that the new Gotye song sounds even more profound when appreciated through headphones instead of blasting out of their stereo speakers from 2 – 3 p.m. on Wednesdays or you suggest to your manager that your weekly one-on-ones could be bi-weekly or literal “standing meetings,” where you don’t sit down and do a quick 5 minute run-down of anything that’s pressing, what you’re looking for is a positive negotiation that will result in realistic and manageable blocks of time where you can write and the people around you are comfortable.

You don’t see how your missed milestone impacts everyone else down the line – Whether writing in the corporate world or hoping to see your short story in Glimmer Train, if you want to be a working writer, money is on the line and people are depending on you.

There was a very specific moment in my professional writing life when I stopped procrastinating. It’s as distinctive a memory for me as the decision to quit smoking. I was communications lead on a $300 million initiative that, for the first time in the company’s history, was going to use project management tools to map the work and deliver against plan. There’s nothing like seeing your communications work itemized on MS Project as a dependency linked to other pieces of work performed by dozens of colleagues downstream with multiple business functions dedicated to the effort and millions upon millions of dollars on the line.

Most, or at least many, corporate assignments aren’t this intense or costly. But the point remains: Your work is part of a longer chain that starts with a business leader or client needing to message, sources pulling together information and donating their time to you, reviewers who make time to approve the piece, and your manager and the newsletter team who’re looking to you to complete the assignment. Each of these colleagues has their own work and limited amounts of time to dedicate to supporting your work. The same goes for the people at publications to whom you make promises about delivering completed assignments, rewrites or creative work.

Honoring other people’s time is a matter of respect, and when you demonstrate that kind of respect, people naturally want to work with you (and publish you) again and help you achieve your own goals. (And that is always a good place to find yourself no matter what kind of writing you do.)

They keep changing the goal line – This happens frequently in corporate communications, and it can throw your entire piece into question or a major part of its messaging. This is why sitting down with your clients or manager with an outline, key messages and recommended sources is so valuable at the beginning of any project. Getting agreement and sign-off on the goals of a piece doesn’t mean the assignment won’t change along the way, but it can buy you additional time to deliver if you need to conduct a whole new batch of interviews to support the new direction. If you work in an organization where goal lines move a lot, then you may also need to adopt a different approach: news briefs on the intranet, for example, instead of feature stories for the e-newsletter or addressing with your manager the ROI of constantly abandoning writing assignments (in terms of what it costs to pay a writing contractor) and get a sense if she or he has any control over the situation.

You’re afraid of succeeding – I watch a lot of professional tennis and, over the years, you learn to spot the players – even ones at the very top – who struggle to win a match. The place you often see this play out is in the serve. It’s the one and only stroke that a player has complete control over; it’s also the moment when a player feels most alone and exposed. Players have practiced for this moment since they were shorter than the racquets they use – a million practice swings to get it just right when the game is on the line. Andy Roddick always delivers. So does Serena Williams and Roger Federer. If it was all about skill – or talent – then Andy Murray and Amelie Mauresmo and even Maria Sharapova would have a lot more trophies on their shelves. It’s about finding a level of belief that exceeds skill.

The late John Wooden, the revered UCLA basketball coach, put together something he called the “Pyramid of Success,” and it’s worth studying – for writing and life (or tennis). You’ll note that ambition is balanced with qualities like industriousness, friendship and loyalty. Enthusiasm measured against poise and self-control.

writer's block“Success,” said Wooden, “is peace of mind which is a direct result of self-satisfaction in knowing you did your best to become the best that you are capable of becoming.” Wooden doesn’t confuse self-satisfaction with ego; he sees it as a direct correlation of working your hardest at being your best. The real competition is inside you to better your skills and your self. There are very few good writing books that will tell you any different.

Ultimately, writing is something you do alone, like standing at the service line. Writing comes from inside you, which is why it can feel so exposed on the page and why we encounter difficulties with it along the way to expressing ourselves or getting writing assignments done. If you’re struggling with issues around success, then print out Wooden’s pyramid and consider where you might be out of balance and which attributes or practices might bring you greater balance in your writing life, and really practice them, and you’ll find you’re getting your writing across the finish line, however you’ve defined that success for yourself.

Writing that inspired me this week:

“He gave me a little pearl-handled .38 for our first anniversary…Figured I’d better leave before I used it on him.”
~ Abby, “Blood Simple” by Joel and Ethan Coen

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